In today's era, TV has become very important part of life as a medium to spread intelligence and social awareness. Do you think it could have other side as well?
It is widely held belief that television is an important medium for spreading intelligence and raising awareness. But, there is also a counter argument among some sections of people who TV can cause harm to the society by depriving their ability to think independently. However, I think that this supposed to be well debated topic considering several factors which should be considered before coming to a conclusion.
It is generally believed that TV plays a vital role in passing information around the globe. This is mainly because of that fact that it is one such inventions by humankind, which raised the bar of sharing information by leaps and bounds, with its unique ability to portray every thought with visual effects along with sound. Although Phone was first invented, it is only with adoption of TV that this information sharing mode took the form of a visual effects.
On the other hand, there are certain groups of people who vehemently disagree with above notion and contend that the harm caused by TV is ir-recoverable.One of the main reasons for this view is, several well-known Psychologists all over the world are conducting several campaigns to keep children away from TV in their childhood, as this would inhibit their mental growth and creativity .
Overall, it is pretty clear that both the ideologies have strong supporting evidences. Both of them cannot be refuted. Nonetheless, I think every object needs to be evaluated for its real purpose is to be used consciously and thoughtfully. This method would never cause any harm to anyone.
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- In today's era, TV has become very important part of life as a medium to spread intelligence and social awareness. Do you think it could have other side as well? 73
- In today's era, TV has become very important part of life as a medium to spread intelligence and social awareness. Do you think it could have other side as well? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: One
...the harm caused by TV is ir-recoverable.One of the main reasons for this view is, s...
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Suggestion: .
...hibit their mental growth and creativity . Overall, it is pretty clear that b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, nonetheless, so, well, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10465116279 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8447188921 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.7891956631 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.727272727 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115255016006 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430640974553 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494650251722 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678896613415 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050609729375 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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