You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter:
-- explain why you took the job
-- describe the problems that you experienced
-- suggest what could be done about them.
Dear Mrs. Mary,
I am writing with regards to the part-time cleaning job in wipe and Shine company that I lately started. I have worked in your business now for two weeks and realised there are some difficulties to get my work done.
The job is suiting well for me because of the timing and flexibility as I am still a student and need time for school and studies. Also, the salary is motivative and competitive.
Just from the beginning when I started here I noticed that there is not enough cleaning supplies or some of them are very old-fashioned. For example, the mop is so old and dirty that it does not make floor clean. The vacuum cleaner is barely functioning and there is not enough wipes.
To make the best of the cleaning can you please think about new supplies, it will make the job much more enjoyable.
Yours sincerely,
Katariina Varblane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e salary is motivative and competitive. Just from the beginning when I started h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53609463865 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668831168831 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7327877759 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1111111111 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186721040243 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543415333238 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524844526967 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104437621621 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517159249606 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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