The figure shows the procedure involved in canning of fruits. It takes lot of steps involved from picking up the fruits to the final packing of them in cans.
To begin with, the fruits are hand picked from the tree and transported by trucks to the location where they are to be canned. After transportation, the fruits are washed and checked for their quality before storing in cold conditions. Then the fruits are weighed/graded after which they are peeled. Before placing them in cans, they are sliced into small bits. The cans are sealed and sterilised after placing the fruits in the can. Before dispatch, they are labelled and stored.
Overall, the canning of fruits require 13 steps that involves washing, grading, peeling, slicing and placing the slices in cans after which they are sealed and cooked and then labelled before dispatch.
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- the diagram below shows a neighbourhood before and after a mall was constructed 64
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries.what are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society? 56
- the diagram below shows the process of maple syrup production 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97887323944 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39739865964 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4853116978 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111126574775 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524955876364 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443507148346 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739984747529 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219348928864 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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