Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Leadership can be so hard to describe and it means different things for different people. It could be related to the leadership of our self, our family, our work in the workplace, the leadership of a group or leadership of a community. Leadership cannot be a talent; it will earn by effort, with scheduling an excelling program for the future of our life. I strongly disagree with this statement that leadership is a talent and comes naturally. Leadership is some steps for reaching goals. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.

To begin with, leadership is some steps to become successful in the future and a leader achieves significant knowledge by effort, studying a lot, education and having a good management skill. For reaching to success, a leader could be guidance and a candle in the way of success. For example, leadership is so necessary for an organization. A leader should create an inspiring vision of the future, motivate and inspire people to engage with that vision, manage the delivery of the vision then building a team that is more effective at achieving the vision. With doing these steps employees distinct a realistic depiction with providing direction and setting priorities. Visions provide marker in an organization, what are the way and where is the destination. A leader should use various tools to analyze the way of achieving success. Leadership motivates people to work hard, the leader alters momentous changes and should be ensured if the works have done correctly. Thus, leadership means set direction and help themselves and others to do the right things to move forward.

Moreover, every person has personal leadership in life; personal leadership is a powerful thing, it extracts our potential. Personal leadership is a way to lead ourselves from inside out to detects ability and interest. It is better to say leadership is one of our most notable tools for achieving more meaning and making life as we want. If people obtain personal leadership, they can crystallize their thinking and establish the direction of life, commit themselves to move in that direction, do determined action and do whatever they identify as their goals in life. People can design, create and achieve their ideal lives. People should think and ask ourselves how do I need to be and act and think to reach their best. Not only leadership makes a person successful, but it also makes people self-organized.

In conclusion, I strongly think leadership is not a talent which is some steps for making the best of ourselves either in personal life or in the workplace. Leadership needs making plans and identifying which goal is the best for the illustrious future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04697986577 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8680490841 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487695749441 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2638684821 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201303027664 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645153658878 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540553786419 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121072355991 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703177349204 0.0645574589148 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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