Some people say that the main enviromental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The loss of particular species of plants and animals has been a major concern in recent years. While some people might say that it is the main environmental problem of our time, others would argue that there are more important problems that need our attention. Personally, I appreciate both these views as I believe they are all equally important issues and need to be addressed as much as possible.
First of all, I understand why the disappearance of plants and animals has been considered a major issue. Due to excessive hunting as well as the lack of preservation and conservation system, the ecosystem has been negatively affected. Some plants are unable to grow and reproduce, animals are becoming extinct, all of which can result in diversity imbalance of the nature. Illegal hunting for ivory, for instance, has been addressed publicly for many years but have not yet to be banned completely. The recent news regarding excessive hunting for ivory that had led to the extinction of an elephant species has raised an alarming concern over the protection systems of governments towards rare plants and animals.
Second, I also agree that environmental problems do not only focus on issues relating to the loss of plants and animals. Critical problems like global warming and greenhouse gas effect has caused a detrimental effect on our health and had a negative impact on our living conditions and well-beings. As a result of increasing gas emissions, the daily temperature has risen significantly over the years. It is therefore predicted that in twenty years' time, we might not be able to save the Earth as it has been heavily damaged by pollutions and unsustainable consumption.
All in all, even though it is true that the decline in some plants and animal species should be addressed more, we should also give our attention to other important issues as well, especially those that may have direct impact on our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03416149068 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8134812028 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537267080745 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9642000143 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.692307692 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280222906338 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898854054911 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103672241868 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184344499951 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135345950924 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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