Countries are often very keen to hold a major sporting event such as The Football World
Cup or The Olympic Games. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of holding an
important international sporting competition.
Those in charge of major nations are often desperate to stage top international football
tournaments, athletics meetings or cycle races. Governments have been known to spend
millions trying to persuade sporting organisations like The IOC to bring events to their
areas. However, although holding a tournament can be advantageous and lucrative,
potential bidders should not lose sight of the possible hazards and pitfalls.
Without doubt, the most obvious benefit is financial. New stadia, accommodation,
transportation links and other infrastructure projects go ahead. This provides a boost for
the local construction industry. Similarly, temporary service-sector jobs are created whilst
the tournament is taking place. Finally, tourism is likely to increase, providing further
economic prosperity.
A slightly less tangible advantage is related to national pride. Citizens feel rightly pleased
that their nation has managed to stage such a prestigious event. The country’s reputation
grows as it becomes connected with the success of the competition in question. This too
could translate into economic success: businesses from a country associated with
competence find it easier to do deals worldwide.
However, the downsides can be considerable. Firstly, the immense cost can exceed the
profits. A region may need to borrow capital to fund building projects and could have to
raise taxes significantly. In addition, the facilities and public amenities constructed might
rarely be required again. Finally, there is the distinct possibility that something will go
terribly wrong. Poor organisation, a transport-workers’ strike, political unrest or even a
terrorist attack could mar a city’s reputation for generations.
Evidently, cities hoping to stage The Asian Games or The European Football
Championships should recognise that, as well as substantial rewards, there are serious
risks. They might produce an internationally-acclaimed success or a total disaster. I would
recommend that political leaders think carefully before entering the bidding process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, similarly, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16722408027 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46235428966 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719063545151 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0893323476 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8095238095 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2380952381 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117889232238 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240628589435 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034214562234 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.024378831406 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435732974966 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.91 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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