Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing career.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over time there is debate always round the corner that professional growth is directly proportional to the personal advancement for any individual to outshine his or her career. This essay agrees that to accelerate growth for any person occupation, they should focus first on their fundamental development. Firstly, this essay will discuss the major mantra for any person success are habits, discipline, and etiquette secondly, hard work, and dedication to any work which comes on to their plate.
History proved that every successful human being somethings were very common that they were disciplined and possess very good etiquette and habits. Similarly, any person those who have to excel in their life they have to be well-disciplined and follow their daily routine and get stick to it. For instance, Times magazine published recently an interview of some of the big company CEO like Tim Cook, Larry Page, etc, they mentioned that they are focus, discipline and never get diverted from their etiquette and habits.
Hard work and dedication are the second most significant elements for any person to achieve any rare of rarest goal. We know when we start doing anything in our life initially it looks like its an impossible task to achieve. However, with the help of a great determination, dedication, and hard work we easily complete task. For example, According to the survey even very intelligent person like Einstein had only 5 percent intelligence on contrary 95 percent he also had to put hard work and dedication.
In conclusion, to be a successful person one should always incorporate good habits and be focused, dedicated and keep on doing hard work all these elements are a core value for success in career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14487632509 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75154089335 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0007416755 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.363636364 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135164675069 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564285566501 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491897659367 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876678204191 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476581255562 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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