You have recently started for an new company.
Write a letter to english speaking friend and In your letter:
Explain the reasons why you changed job
Describe your new job
Tell him/her your other news.
Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you healthy and heartily. I'm writing you to share that I've just joined GSK pharmaceuticals limited.
Albeit the prominent reasons behind this transition are better career opportunity and higher salary package. As you know, I'm only one person who earns for my family, so it's quite important for me to do job which strengthen my financial position. Besides, it has fulfilled my dream of working with multinational organization too.
Let me share more about my current role and responsibilities. Being as regional business manager, I've to look after whole Gujarat. There are about 15 team members who report to me. My main duties are not only performance but also people development.
What's more, although my current dwelling is quite spacious to live with my family, I've recently purchased my dream house. I am so excited! Hope you too. I am planning to conduct small function next month. Without fail, you have to come with your whole family at that time.
Give my best regards to your family and see you soon.
Warm wishes,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...and higher salary package. As you know, Im only one person who earns for my family...
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...mance but also people development. Whats more, although my current dwelling is q...
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... quite spacious to live with my family, Ive recently purchased my dream house. I am...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... see you soon. Warm wishes, James
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, look, so, then, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70241661399 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716666666667 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4181232528 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135384125559 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442848834317 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568478121075 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886777023158 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537784229383 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.41 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.