You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving what type of rooms you would like and ask them how much the weekend will cost Al

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You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know
when you will be arriving and leaving,
what type of rooms you would like,
and ask them how much the weekend will cost.
Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Michel Dave and the reason that I am writing this letter is regarding my interest to stay at your hotel during my upcoming visit with my family to Daman. As per our schedule, we will be reaching Daman on 25th December'21 in the morning and leaving on 2nd January'21 by thd late night.

By looking towards our interest, I would like to book a deluxe room which would be quite spacious with all rudimentary facilities such as neat and clean queen size bed, a coffee maker machine, a cattle and a proper heating and cooling system. Moreover, in order to entertain ourselves, please let me know if you have television and music system in room. Kindly share quotation for the whole booking including meal and please mention weather the rate will be same during the weekend or not.

As my family and I am more interested in natural scenes and extreme sports activities, it would be appreciated if you guide me about any specific adventure activities or tourist places where we can enjoy more and make this visit memorable.

Look forward to hearing from you with details to procced further for booking.

Yours faithfully,
Michel Dave

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, regarding, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82089552239 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50100843501 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701492537313 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9285349482 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.125 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221048933436 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811331711768 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251312964003 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109709961082 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325343764155 0.0580467560999 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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