1 - You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know
• when you will be arriving and leaving,
• what type of rooms you would like
• and ask them how much the weekend will cost
• also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I trust this letter finds you well. I am writing to make arrangements for a weekend stay at your esteemed seaside hotel for myself and my family.
We plan to arrive on the 29th of December and depart on the 1st of January 2023. Considering the duration of our stay, we would like to inquire about the availability and pricing of suitable accommodation for a family of eight.
Ideally, we are looking for two interconnected suites with at least four rooms. We prefer a configuration that allows for a separate room for elders for a quiet resting space and two separate rooms for the teenagers, who are likely to engage in activities and games during the night.
Could you please provide information on the cost associated with the weekend stay? Given that this period falls within the peak season, we understand the demand for rooms is high, and we would appreciate clarity on the pricing to facilitate our arrangements.
Furthermore, we are keen to make the most of our time at your hotel and the surrounding areas. Could you please share details about any activities or places of interest near the hotel? We are particularly interested in family-friendly activities and local attractions.
Thank you in advance for your prompt attention to these matters. We look forward to making our reservations and enjoying a delightful weekend at your seaside hotel.
Yours sincerely,
Sam
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06837606838 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91687250769 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594017094017 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7910070487 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235545050644 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906938185401 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600279377408 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142103391821 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788906014959 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06837606838 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91687250769 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594017094017 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7910070487 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235545050644 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906938185401 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600279377408 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142103391821 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788906014959 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.