"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
The argument relies on the data in another island where situations could be different from the island we are concerned about. It says that due to increase in population the number of moped accidents will increase but necessary evidence behind this conclusion is not provided. Also, there could be other more viable solutions to the problem that is stated in the argument which are not considered.
The author claims that due to increase in population of Balmer Island, the number of moped accidents will increase. The question is if this is actually the case. There is no evidence that the number of moped accidents actually increases during summer months due to increase in population. The author suggests that the town council should limit the number of mopeds rented by moped companies by half the number, so the number of moped accidents can be reduced. However, he doesn’t provide any proof that this approach will actually work. To reach a conclusion, he has to collect more information about the traffic system, road condition and other factors which might be relevant to the accidents.
Another important question we have to answer is that are mopeds solely responsible for the accidents? There is an underlying assumption in the argument that mopeds are mostly responsible for the increase in accidents, for which he didn’t provide any evidence. But there could be other reasons behind the increased accidents. Other vehicles might be responsible for this, which are not considered. May be people do not abide by the specific traffic laws and safety systems, which might lead to increased accidents due to increased population. The people driving the mopeds may not be well qualified to drive, which also accounts for the accidents.
The author bases his suggestion on the condition of the nearby island of Seaville. But the question is, are the two islands comparable? Are they similar? The author suggests that the Balmer Island town council should follow the measure taken by the Seaville Island. But the conditions in these two islands could be different. May be Seaville Island doesn’t have a population increase in the summer, which makes the situations different. We need to identify the similarities and differences between the two islands before recommending any possible solution.
There are some assumptions the author made for which he didn’t give any evidence. He also recommended an approach taken by the nearby island which may not be as effective for the particular island in question. There are many unanswered questions which make the conclusion open for challenge.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 426 350
No. of Characters: 2126 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.543 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.991 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.606 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 164 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 56 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.04 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.372 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.52 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 13.6137724551 147% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2214.0 2260.96107784 98% => OK
No of words: 422.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24644549763 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75240103582 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42654028436 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 19.7664670659 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3769514162 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.56 119.503703932 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.88 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16 5.70786347227 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266389214697 0.218282227539 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858228777876 0.0743258471296 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937524596363 0.0701772020484 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163945293353 0.128457276422 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895476213435 0.0628817314937 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 98.500998004 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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