You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
1) What is the article about?
2) What is the error?
3) What you expect an editor to do?
Respected Sir,
I am one the regular reader of your news paper. I am writing this letter you is just to inform you that the information mentioned on para 32 of page no 2 about the congratulation wishes to mr. handsome., I found that there is one error while drafting or printing this para by your news agencies.
I am very close friend of mr. handsome. our emotional and relation bonding is like a real brother and at the same time i never missed to read your new agencies new paper. but today while reading one of the article in your new paper i found that there is one error while drafting or printing of the para which were printed in your organisation news paper. I wouldn't had written this letter if the error was not my very close buddy but as I mentioned that our relation is like of a real brother and there is one error while drafting or printing this letter so I thought let me inform the editor of the news agency who printed this news paper.
I would like to draw your attention to para 32 of page 2 where normally people give article for birthday wishes or any wishes. In this para where some family members (i.e. mr. handsome's parents) are giving birthday wishes to mr. handsome. while typing this para edior has wrongly written "LATE" word in front of his father name.Whereas mr. handsome parents are still alive so I request you to issue one more article with correct that para and apologies for inconvenient cause by the my friend mr. handsome and his family. in revised para.
thanking you for keeping a patience and hearing of my words.
thanking you,
Best Regards,
Praful Shah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... I am one the regular reader of your news paper. I am writing this letter you is just t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...ews paper. I am writing this letter you is just to inform you that the information...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...his para by your news agencies. I am very close friend of mr. handsome. o...
^
Line 11, column 41, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...I am very close friend of mr. handsome. our emotional and relation bonding is like ...
^^^
Line 11, column 128, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'missed reading'.
Suggestion: missed reading
...al brother and at the same time i never missed to read your new agencies new paper. but today ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ed to read your new agencies new paper. but today while reading one of the article ...
^^^
Line 11, column 233, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ng one of the article in your new paper i found that there is one error while dra...
^
Line 11, column 343, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which were printed in your organisation news paper. I wouldnt had written this l...
^^
Line 11, column 345, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...hich were printed in your organisation news paper. I wouldnt had written this letter if t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 359, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ted in your organisation news paper. I wouldnt had written this letter if the error wa...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 631, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...tor of the news agency who printed this news paper. I would like to draw your att...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 238, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...giving birthday wishes to mr. handsome. while typing this para edior has wrongly writ...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ior has wrongly written 'LATE' word in front of his father name.Whereas...
^^
Line 17, column 338, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whereas
...apos; word in front of his father name.Whereas mr. handsome parents are still alive so...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 489, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...and apologies for inconvenient cause by the my friend mr. handsome and his family. in ...
^^^^^^
Line 17, column 532, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... my friend mr. handsome and his family. in revised para. thanking you for ...
^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanking
...nd his family. in revised para. thanking you for keeping a patience and hearing ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 23, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing a patience and hearing of my words. thanking you, Best Regards, ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanking
...tience and hearing of my words. thanking you, Best Regards, Praful ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 292.0 206.0 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66438356164 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45149989895 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489726027397 0.622605031667 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.971914574 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.125 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1545805634 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527448001137 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729923620944 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106066701112 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559054371266 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.