Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The argument is about Nature's Way that is opening its new franchise in the town of Plainsville related to the health food and other health-related products. At first, this argument might look well justified, however, with an accurate check of the argument, we can see that it has some flaws.
Firstly, the author has said that Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. He does not provide any evidence or reliable figures that people in this area have healthy lives. How does he know people in this area have a healthy lifestyle? Based on what factors, the author has considered this area suitable for the next franchise. There is no evidence about this subject. There are only some reports from the merchants about the sales of running shoes and exercise clothing. But again, they have not provided accurate statistics about this subject. Relying on some reports without any figures and reliable statistics is not acceptable. Additionally, how they prove that people with the aim of the exercise, have bought running shoes or exercise clothing? How they prove that the local people have bought these products? There is no answer to these questions.
Secondly, the author has said that the local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. The author does not provide us with any statistics to support the claim. Without figures or statistics, it is not reasonable to jump to the conclusion. How do they know that this claim is true? Do all the people in these classes live in this city? It is possible tourists or travelers have participated in these classes for a short time. Do they have any statistics about the number of exercise classes in this city? There may be some limited classes available for local people, so with a little number of people, they can be full all the time. Therefore, how they prove that these classes are popular among people in Plainsville? For reinforcement of their claim, they should have enough research such as interviews or field research in the city.
Finally, the author also has said that Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age. This argument is not predictable. All people are required to pass the exercise class in their school, but it does not mean that they are interested in exercise and continue it even after school. They may use other methods for being fit in their adulthood, for example, having a diet or being vegetarian.
In conclusion, the author to strengthen his argument should improve the weaknesses of his claim and answer all the questions mentioned above.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 475 350
No. of Characters: 2325 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.668 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.895 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.618 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 124 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 85 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.964 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.481 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.393 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.273 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.449 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 28.8173652695 180% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2398.0 2260.96107784 106% => OK
No of words: 475.0 441.139720559 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04842105263 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71176691078 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 204.123752495 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454736842105 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 705.55239521 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 19.7664670659 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3468952562 57.8364921388 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6428571429 119.503703932 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9642857143 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128563408751 0.218282227539 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346708760814 0.0743258471296 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088002535997 0.0701772020484 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859796590852 0.128457276422 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852194183788 0.0628817314937 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.3799401198 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.3550499002 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.197005988 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 98.500998004 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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