People from all over the world are tending to migrate to a different country in search of better employment and lifestyle. Once settled, they also make their family members live with them. Though it can be seen as a family reunion, there are positive and negative impacts on children as well as other family members’ lives.
Since the inception of globalization, migration to different countries has increased a lot. Some people move there to find better jobs and to earn more money and others in search of better living conditions. However, children have no such choices and once a family decides to move to a new country, they have to leave everything behind to start afresh.
Even though many children are fascinated by the thought of moving to a new country but there are plenty of others who are teary-eyed by the thoughts of leaving their friends and old school. These emotional children cannot get rid of the feeling of homesickness and are unable to relate themselves with the new schools and friends, which eventually lead their career to the worst path.
It cannot be denied that a new country opens a door to many wonderful opportunities to a curious child but there are also times when they become a subject of humiliation because of their race and ethnicity and don’t know how to deal with it. Hence, moving to a new country can be a hard choice at first for a child because of their immaturity but it gradually becomes easier once they start to become used to the new culture and lifestyle.
In essence, migration can be extremely difficult for the children because of their race, new culture, and homesickness. Undoubtedly, migration generates opportunities for better education and career but several children may not adjust themselves in a foreign country. However, others who do so increase their chances to become successful eventually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eave everything behind to start afresh. Even though many children are fascinated...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98089171975 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74990364552 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528662420382 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1538461538 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188123002206 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705751399706 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404145334743 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109083138818 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296093886657 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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