Indviduals can do nothing to improve the environment only the goverment and large companies can make a difference,to what extent you agree or disagree?
Owing to the problem, the rapidly increasing environmental problem is cause for the authorities as well as for citizens and companies. Therefore, everyone has their own perceptions, to keep the environment safe and healthy is the government responsibility as per some people, while others said that individual can do nothing without the help of higher authorities, for instance, government and entrepreneurs. I completely disagree with the above statement, this essay will give you a plausible reason behind the phenomenon and its impact as a result of the environment.
To begin, civil officers will play a crucial role in maintaining the environment clean and healthy however, it is not only the government's duty to keep surroundings clean and secure, although civilians ought to be responsible. At the moment, there are plethora of factors causing environmental problems to illustrate, factories in the urban areas discharging their waste in the form of fumes which contaminating the air continuously. These poisoned fumes have carbon dioxide and unburnt carbon which is dangerous for our lives. In addition, authorities have to make some legislation to control this pollution by moving those factories to the countryside. In the meanwhile, they must educate and aware the civilians that how they keep their environment clean and healthy.
On the contrary, an individual’s ownership towards the environment cannot be regret. Every person needs to play an essential role to maintain their surrounding fresh and litter-free, they ought to be responsible for dispose-off their material in the provided litter bins rather than to throw outside which causes infection and leads towards health issues particularly in adolescents. Although humans keep their environment safe while not throwing the plastic bags in the waterways though, it too helps in the safety of marine life.
To gist, I would like to say that if the local authorities and individuals works together, it helps to resolve this issue in a better way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...and healthy however, it is not only the governments duty to keep surroundings clean and sec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43987341772 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15459666699 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604430379747 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6524413526 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.25 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828595658392 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280865048624 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317646926996 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435419308036 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387342490565 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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