Write about the following topic:
1- Happiness is considered very important in life
2- What is difficult to define?
3- What factors are important in achieving happiness?
It is fairly easy to comprehend that happiness is quite basic need for every human being to spend cheerful life. While I believe that happiness varies person to person accordingly which can be difficult to describe easily but, there are some numerous things that could be most important to be delighted in life.
It is often said that happiness is more essential which plays most significant role in entire life that actually is the only way to spend better and healthy life. Truly said, health is wealth which falls in the definition of happiness which gives the placidity to people in their life completely. Furthermore, a recent survey depicts that happiness can never be make people feel in a same way neither with family nor friend. Whereas, some people hold the opinion that happiness always possess the meaning of luxury life which makes them feel prouder for example, driving an expensive car, big house and different renowned gadgets. While other says, ancient and peasant people had nothing like that but they spend their lives happily.
Moreover, number of elements can be done for achieving gladness wherein every individual fix their priority according to wish and goals for instance, some people do hard work in their early age to get better job while some are interested to start their business and few of want to move in showbiz that eventually will become the reasons of their happy life. Personally, I feel very proud and happy when I give my most of the time with parents.
Al in all, in order to be happy in life people need to do some desirable thing that can make more happier which will be supportive in daily life as well as in career which plays imperative role for everyone.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-09-04 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a same way" with adverb for "same"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...happiness can never be make people feel in a same way neither with family nor friend. Whereas...
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Line 13, column 94, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...o do some desirable thing that can make more happier which will be supportive in daily life ...
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Line 13, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich plays imperative role for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86734693878 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35691461627 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3840832006 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.1 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11407211287 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054550799309 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291197828586 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754186851387 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268970572524 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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