The idea of having a single career is become an old fashion one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Nowadays, it can be seen that for earning ample amount of money people are moving to do several jobs instead of depending on only one job that actually have become old fashion. Alongside with this, future education will always be helpful for entire life.
To begin with, this paragraph will discuss about the cons and pros of having one job which has both consequences positive or negative for instance, doing one job as a full-time employee is quite enough for every individuals. But, research depicts that eight hours of duty time is enough for being an employee otherwise, doing excessive work creates number of disease namely; Stress, Blood pressure and many others that eventually could devastate the life. Currently, people are trying to earn money more and more within a short time owing to rapid extension in the world.
On the other hand, currently youngsters are very keen to do several work in the same time that helps them for earning money for example, free lancer, part-time and others. many adepts assert that free lancer always do different work by home because of earning plenty of money although, it has number of adverse consequences that would be dangerous for their mental and physical health such as, spending much time in front of laptop, work more than the capability, no physical activity and so on which even disturb the education to some extent.
In conclusion, working different job is far beneficial but, not to over look its disadvantages. Moreover, health and wealth both are more essential among every individuals therefore people must be known pertaining to its pitfalls as well.
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- Some people say schools should be responsible to teach young adults to look after their health others think this is not responsibility of schools To what extent do you agree or disagree 58
- One of the best methods to motivate and encourage workers is to pay them according to what they produce or sell. Do you think this is the best method? Give relevant examples from your experience. 72
- Many people today used their phones to communicate by sending text messages than talking. What are the reasons for this? Does it have advantages/disadvantages? 84
- Scientist has been warning for many years about the importance of protecting the environment and that we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warnings, many people do not do this, what are the reasons for that and how people can be enc 78
- Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private lifeseparate from their work life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun work seems to be countable; consider using: 'several works'.
Suggestion: several works
...urrently youngsters are very keen to do several work in the same time that helps them for ea...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: FREE_LANCER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'freelancer'?
Suggestion: freelancer
...lps them for earning money for example, free lancer, part-time and others. many adepts asse...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...ple, free lancer, part-time and others. many adepts assert that free lancer always d...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: FREE_LANCER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'freelancer'?
Suggestion: freelancer
...ime and others. many adepts assert that free lancer always do different work by home becaus...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...own pertaining to its pitfalls as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03717472119 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5005133454 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6409993173 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.555555556 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.4444444444 7.06120827912 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189364681487 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830676889973 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707480691459 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12781764548 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100292862281 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.