In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion?
Looking into the recent survey of some US region wherein curfew is enforced, meanwhile adolescents are not allowed to go outside of the home after certain time until mature person leads them. I, however, support the statement that saving lives of nations should be the first priority whether need to implement curfew or any other sacrifice.
Imposing curfew could have been several reasons but, it has both consequences either positive or negative. My inclination support the statement that for the sake of saving lives of people government can take any action, while, on the other hand, it has seen many of time that government imposes the curfew in case of any violence, such as, street crime, terror attack, snatching, suspicious activity or many others. In such cases, government soldiers plays imperative role for protection of the society.
Moreover, survey depicts that enforcing curfew on account of any political influence or any threat in which government need to face many obstacles that actually hits the economy as well for example, shutter down of business, freezing of international flights, banned on import export and so on that actually could devastate the economy of the country. Along with this, people are being faced the problem of nutrition and students cannot go to their colleges and universities for instant, recently it can be seen in India where Kashmeri people are facing these all above stated points that was deliberately forced by Indian government.
To sum up, in order to streamline the situation of the country government need to take appropriate action either it has detrimental effect or not. Hence, people should endure these all things for the betterment of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ings for the betterment of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28158844765 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62979974165 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.440499207 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.555555556 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8888888889 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840044837245 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332209413016 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386424378801 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520092292109 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490524081095 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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