In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
The author makes a more generalized statement that, given any field of enquiry the beginners are more likely to make important contribitions than the expertees.In fact it depends on the field that is being considered as there can be lots of factors which highly influences the field.
For instance, if we consider the field of real estate where the prices of land are capricious and needs lots of analysis to judge a place.As the beginner would only have a smattering of knowledge which ideally doesn’t help to suffice in this field.beginner can rarely contribute important aspects as there is lots of effort analysis that has to be done in order to come to a conclusion, especially in the field of real estate.On the other side the experts possesing more knowledge can quickly make decisions and can provide some valuable contributions.
Even if we look at the marketing field where the sales are erratic.this field requires a good amount of ground knowledge on which any conclusions are based.As far as this field is concerned the beginner cannot make a quick decision as it might incur a great loss to the organisation.As beginners are unaware of the situations which might lead to the ineffective decision making.
However, there are some cases where beginners have more advantage than expertees.For instance, in the software field which is growing at a rapid rate where for almost every hour there is a new technology that is being invented and made effective for its use.whenever, a new technology is concerned of which the expert is unaware of, beginners can provide some quick and important contributions.
In some fields the beginners might be in the upper hand and in some fields the experts might make some good contributions.Therefore, all the factors which might have an effect are to be well analyzed and then come to a conclusion.
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- Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition. 50
- In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions. 50
- Some people believe that competition drives young athletes to perform at their best, while others believethat competition discourages those who are not athletically talented from participating in organized sports. 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 309.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20064724919 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08815537779 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478964401294 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 23.0359550562 265% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.040349874 60.3974514979 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 321.4 118.986275619 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.8 23.4991977007 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8 5.21951772744 303% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377231451863 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225173209433 0.0831039109588 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877753483748 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225173209433 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877753483748 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.0 14.1392134831 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 48.8420337079 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 12.1743820225 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 11.2143820225 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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