Dear Sara,
Hope you're doing well. I’m doing good too. It's been interminable time I haven't written to you I'm witting to inform you that I have moved to England recently.
I was completing an internship with multinational company, the management of the company was absolutely satisfied from my work during my internship.However, they have offered me a position of a business analyst in one of their branch in England.I was tremendously caused for the offer and accept it. Significantly, currently, I'm assigning an apartment with few local girls they are extremely kind and benevolent. This apartment is only thirty minutes’ drive away from my work. I must mention I was fortunate to find place in this congested area. I possess all the required facilities nearby encompass a very gigantic department store, and few traditional restaurants like Indian and Arabic.I don’t suffer frequently in discovering halal food.
In addition, Christmas is approaching near I desperately desire you to come over we can spend some quality time. I will be enduring two long weeks off and your company can indeed establish difference we can have planned to explore northern cities of UK. Sara,
I have to wind up now I am getting delayed for work. I will look forward to hearing from you.
Yours loves,
Azra Jaan
- Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:•Explain why you have gone to live in the new city•Describe the place where you are living•Invite your friend to come and see you 87
- many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. This has can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children.What problems do children face when going online 95
- It is often argued that the group of residents’ assume that in learning institutes, an exercise lectures ought to be mandatorily added on daily schedule 80
- Some people say that having a lot of TV channels is good, while others argue that it reduces the quality of programs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 95
- Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:•Explain why you have gone to live in the new city•Describe the place where you are living•Invite your friend to come and see you 87
Dear john,
Dear john,
I hope you will find this letter in the pink of your health. Well i was thinking from a long time to write you but unable to do so due to company audits.
Here is a good news for you, i recently switched a company and migrated to vegas which is your neighbor city. I was fortunate enough that i got a good rental apartment which does not have any issue with the space and is near by my work place. Moving further, I know you have never been to this town but here i would love to acknowledge you about the place as it is one of the most happening area i have ever visited . I generally spare time on my weekends to explore new lifestyle and new places, which i quiet sure you will fall in love with, if you get a chance to visit. so i am really dying to meet you and show you the most unusual places and food courts explored by me. In addition to all this, there are a lot to explore and also many fun activities available too which are really enjoyable.
Furthermore, its long time we have not seen each other so i desperately desire you to plan a trip to vegas on your birthday which is coming next month . It will be my assurance that this will be your most memorable birthday ever. Eagerly waiting for your reply.
With lots of Love,
James
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Sara, Hope youre doing well. I'm doing good too. It...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... good too. Its been interminable time I havent written to you Im witting to inform you...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...terminable time I havent written to you Im witting to inform you that I have moved...
^^
Line 6, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...sfied from my work during my internship.However, they have offered me a position of a b...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...alyst in one of their branch in England.I was tremendously caused for the offer a...
^
Line 6, column 327, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nd accept it. Significantly, currently, Im assigning an apartment with few local g...
^^
Line 6, column 696, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...onal restaurants like Indian and Arabic.I don't suffer frequently in discove...
^
Line 6, column 696, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...onal restaurants like Indian and Arabic.I don't suffer frequently in discove...
^
Line 9, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to explore northern cities of UK. Sara, I have to wind up now I am getting delay...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 54, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d up now I am getting delayed for work. I will look forward to hearing from you. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0563410887 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712962962963 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8434232618 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8461538462 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150090835175 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054709979751 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524540602222 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976072087152 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578748676585 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.