The various factors which affect two different age groups while working in the company are displayed in the bar chart.
Overall, it is clear from the chart that the workers at an early age are more primarily focused on their self-development and future prospects; Although they have other issues as well like working environment and wages. The second age group is more concerned about their salaries with little worry about their job security and work culture.
The noticeable thing from the chart is that younger workers desire to improve their overall skills but they are not able to do it. As the survey results show that with extremely busy work schedule it is difficult to sharpen their skill-set. This thing overall affects the company's efficiency. Additionally, there are many of this age group who are not satisfied with the company's work culture and way of getting the promotion.
It is also evident that senior workers are worried about their wages and. From the chart, many feel that they are not getting salaries which they should get and this is adding to poor performance from them. Moreover, there are some issues they have regarding senior administrators above them and team spirit. Additionally, many feel they are not getting promoted. These all factors causing poor performance from them as they no longer enjoy doing what they are doing in the company as visible from the data showed by the survey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as well 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...Although they have other issues as well like working environment and wages. The seco...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... skills but they are not able to do it. As the survey results show that with extre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02521008403 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44397718973 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53781512605 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9978394543 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227295455645 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865792018609 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692230124429 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16290655927 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550653486107 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.