Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy.
Some people enjoy the fame and attention they get from the public because of their occupation, be it a sportsman, an actor or any politician. They enjoy how public notices them and gives importance to them. Some public figures don't mind sharing their private life with public, rather, they enjoy being in some kind of controversy to get attention. On the other hand, some celebrities prefer to keep their professional and personal lives separate.Being a public figure and maintaining a private life is quite difficult because of the media, paparazzi's and other interviews celebrities are asked to do. It is very easy for the public to know about the personal lives of celebrities through social media as it is one of the most convenient platforms to get information from, including the opportunities of communication or interaction. One of the reasons why social media is very tempting to the public is because it allows the celebrities to give live updates to the audience, by which people feel excited and connected. And I do agree with the statement, but in my opinion, it should be the public figure's choice of what he or she wants to share and what they want to keep to themselves.
A few reasons why I support the statement are: firstly, being a public figure means people will try to be like them and they will have to be open and honest to them as they are considered idols by some. Secondly, people show a kind of trust towards the public figure, by which they feel like it is fine for them to know more about the celebrities. At some point, they believe that it is their right to know about some of the public figure's personal life to understand them more. Thirdly, people get a chance to get over from their tedious lives and takes vicarious from knowing about the interesting activities going on in the celebrity's lives.
Starting from being an idol or more of a role model to somebody. There are so many sportsmen, politicians, or actors whom people follow. And by follow, they want to be like them. Their work attracts people in a way that the public wants to know more about them and want to pursue the same field. Some celebrity's journey inspires people to reach at a certain point. This is why people like to know about their private lives. One cannot know one's life's path to their success without knowing their failures, which directly concludes to the knowledge of their private lives.
Secondly, public shows deliberate trust in some of the public figures. For example, the president of a country or any minister who's been chosen by the public. Of course, a man is known for his work and his compatibility, but at the end of the day, people would want to know more about the past of the person they are voting to be the president of their country. As he's one of the most respected and valued persons in the country, his position itself gives the right to the public to know about his personal life. This example states the writer's assertion in the question valid in every form. One can be judged from their personal lives. As if someone cannot handle their private lives steadily or does not give equal importance to individuals, how can he be even trusted for such a presidential position.
Additionally, it has become a part of one's life to gossip about the lives of celebrities. Take it any kind of controversy in the life of any celebrity. The media will have an umpteen amount of information to share to the public about these big-name personalities. This brings us to the third point mentioned above. People gets over their mundane lives and talk about the wrangling shows by the media and the paparazzi, which gives a sneak in the personal lives of the celebrities. People show a keen interest in knowing about the marriages of their favorite actors, or any accusation on a political member, or any kind of drug addicting problems to their favorite sportsmen. As much as people engross these news, the media gets itself more and more indulged into such activities. For example, asking blatant questions in the interviews, which might make the celebrity feel insecure or uncomfortable. The more demand of the news gives the reporters more excitement to try inaccurate activities, like stalking, or taking pictures without permission, or contacting. One of the examples for this is the case of Princess Diana. She was known for her work in the charity, improvement in many aspects of her country. When the news of her accident came on, it was revealed that she was being followed by a group of reporters, which led to the misfortune.
Concluding the topic, the writer's statement is amenable, but there should always be some boundaries which the media and the public, both should respect of the public figure. Furthermore, no celebrity should be forced or harassed in a way which makes him feel indecorous or offensive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, kind of, of course, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 14.8657303371 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 33.0505617978 221% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 135.0 58.6224719101 230% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4024.0 2235.4752809 180% => OK
No of words: 841.0 442.535393258 190% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78478002378 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.38516480713 4.55969084622 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70365093574 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 343.0 215.323595506 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407847800238 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1279.8 704.065955056 182% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 39.0 20.2370786517 193% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8088423931 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.179487179 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5641025641 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349508963541 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917482792573 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076567489924 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21566525286 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737099776512 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 165.0 100.480337079 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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