you have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. you want to apply for the job. write a letter to the manager of the company in your letter:-
provide information about yourself.
give details of your previous experience.
say why the company should consider you for the job.
Dear Mr. Nick,
I have seen the job position in your company for a computer hardware technician in last week's newspaper.
I have done my bachelor's in computer applications and computer networking and technical support diploma in Canada. I am having 4 plus years of experience in computer repairing and technical support and currently working as a computer technician in an MNC in Canada. Working in a team helped me a lot to build confidence and moral to do special tasks, however, I can work individually.
Working experience of 4 plus years made me a quick and perfect driver of the computer as I know each and every part and problems of it. solving problems and changing or repairing parts is now my left handjob. Adding to it, I can provide technical support as well, as I am having a good knowledge of routers, nodes and the languages of the computer.
My experience in this field surely helps me to gain this position as I feel, I can provide you the best of me.
Yours thankfully,
Harman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'weeks'' or 'week's'?
Suggestion: weeks'; week's
... a computer hardware technician in last weeks newspaper. I have done my bachelor...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd technical support diploma in Canada. I am having 4 plus years of experience in...
^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...el, I can provide you the best of me. Yours thankfully, Harman
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79661016949 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83312913628 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553672316384 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.272970585 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115302827845 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544834594447 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754967930191 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960581513667 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109904049146 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.