last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. they have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Dear Harman and Gurpinder,
I hope you two doing great. I have just received the photos of our holiday spent in New York City. It was a fun and frolic journey with you two guys and i hope you enjoyed it as well.
I beg your apology for writing this letter for so late, as after returning back from there, I was stuck in my office work for two-three weeks. I was extremely busy to complete the pending stuff.
Visiting New York City of the most powerful country in the USA was an amazing feeling. The crowd cheering and the hustle-bustle at the Time Square was live on fire and the beauty of Central Park was beyond anything. You both guys made my vacation extraordinary and enjoyable.
On the occasion of my mom's birthday, I cordially invite you two to come to Canada and attend this birthday ceremony going to be held next month. I am sure, it will be a great fun with you and i want to take both of you to see the Canadian landscape and famous places. Downtown Toronto is known for its beautiful buildings like CN tower.
Hope, you will come to this party next month so, we can enjoy again.
Warm Wishes,
Ramneek.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd frolic journey with you two guys and i hope you enjoyed it as well. I beg...
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Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...iting this letter for so late, as after returning back from there, I was stuck in my office wo...
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Line 17, column 193, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re, it will be a great fun with you and i want to take both of you to see the Can...
^
Line 27, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...joy again. Warm Wishes, Ramneek.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54066985646 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32809416377 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.273451912 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221238409428 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754244063251 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073563336292 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103531914317 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998867343058 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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