Nowadays because of technological advancement our lives have become super smooth to live.There are people who strongly believe that various entertainers are more necessary than scientist in today's time, but I oppose this belief and agree on the fact that scientist have a superior place in our society than entertainers.
To begin with, Technologist have invented many process and equipment which have a deep impact on our day to day life. Instruments such as Fan, Air conditioner,Television, Laptop, Robots, and the list is endless makes living condition more livable. The major reason behind any invention is the necessity,as there is an English saying,"Necessity is the mother of Invention", Scientist are driven from this needs and to solve the issue they invent something useful.For instance, overgrowing use of plastic has given rise to large amount of pollution , which is affecting every single living thing on earth in a negative manner.Scientist have developed a new kind of plastic collection and shredding machine which converts big chunks of plastic into fine small pieces that are reused in other industries.Hence scientist are trying to solve larger environmental problem to save our world.
Secondly, Inventing something useful is always a responsible and hard to achieve task without failing once.It is because science behind any process is too difficult to understand in one go,therefore researchers always uses the trail and error method to get the desired solution.The method itself is very tiring,but still the hunger to innovate something keeps them motivated and they word hard for it, by dedicating time and energy to it.This hardworking and dedicative nature of scientist encourages people to respect them more.
However, on the other hand some groups of people believe that Entertainers are also equally vital for the society. It is because leisure time in our life is totally dependent on entertainers ranging from Sports, Movies, Drama, Music, Dance and so on. People also try to relive stress through some entertainment programs. For instance comedy television series are quite famous among senior citizens as they make their isolated life more happening through watching it.
In conclusion, because of progress in scientific advancement and the dedication showed by them towards environment, in my opinions scientist deserved to be more respected than entertainers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49326145553 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21551674302 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628032345013 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.857592835 49.4020404114 378% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.8 106.682146367 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.5 7.06120827912 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155658288894 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758974497616 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718436496895 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955020005971 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716694034955 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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