great nation
Admittedly, it is plausible that a great nation can be determined by the welfare of that nation’s people in some cases. To be specific, according to the recent the global wellness index, Northern Europe countries such as Denmark, Sweden, and Finland came in high ranks. At the same time, there countries have developed economies and high standard of living in the world. This is because their social individual welfare policy enables stable jobs and regular incomes, which led to overall national wealth.
Nevertheless, not all general welfare can indicate the success of a nation. For example, the Great Britain during the Victorian era had considered as a great and powerful nation in the world. This was possible because of Industrial Revolution. James Watt's steam engine made this possible to change hand production methods to machines, which led to an increase in efficiency and productivity. This brought great wealth and property to Britain. However, at the same time, the working people had to struggle with hazardous working condition such as long working hours, irregular breaks and even child labor. In this context, it is difficult to argue that the general welfare shows a great nation.
Furthermore, the achievements of leaders and general welfare is not always mutually exclusive in indicating the success of a nation. For instance, Emancipation Proclamation by Abraham Lincoln successfully brought freedom to thousands of slaves. Moreover, it brought gradual changes in general public’s conception regarding the way they felt with the ownership of slaves. This equal citizenship and wellbeing of general public made it possible to regard the United States as a great nation. However, at the same time, it would not have been possible without Lincoln’s devotion and his achievement.
Furthermore, the success of a nation and the welfare of public is not always mutually exclusive. This is because the achievements of a leader can have a positive impact on people's lives. For instance, Emancipation Proclamation by Abraham Lincoln successfully brought freedom to thousands of slaves. Also, it brought about gradual changes in general people's conception regarding the way they felt with the ownership of slaves. This equal citizenship and freedom enabled to regard the United States as one of great countries in the world. However, it would have been impossible without Lincoln's devotion and achievement.
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- It is better for students to go to school for more than 11 months throughout the year. 70
- 11.Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 33
- What would you change to improve your health?1. Food quality2. The amount of exercise in your life3. The amount of stress in your life 76
- bicycle 50
- The author argues that governments should address current issues in advance rather than future problems. While it is plausible in some cases, it may not always be the case. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...This equal citizenship and wellbeing of general public made it possible to regard the United S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, in general, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43421052632 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90860315257 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455263157895 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4520765702 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.8636363636 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302570123801 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105719739206 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142362661199 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212239389666 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827106751734 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.