Some people think that mobile phones are most useful for their professional life other thinks that mobile phones are most useful in their personal life. Discuss of them and give your opinion.
In present context, where every living being is deeply engaged in achieving there goals, mobile phones are the most popular medium that allows them to stay connected with the society or getting information to achieve professional goals. However, it is often debated if phones are more useful for private or official live and I will be touching on both the opinions and than draw a suitable conclusion.
To begin with, having the ability to share personal experiences with nears and dears via call or rather, video chats these days. Moreover, having the smart communication device lin pocket lets one connect to anyone around the world almost instantaneously such that one can have a discussion or inquire aboute health of their loved ones who might be living thousands of kilometres away. There are many social media applications where people usually share their images and thoughts about the time they spend with friends or while having a family holiday which keeps everybody in their social circle aware of what is happening in one's life.
When it comes to professional side of things, smart phones are considered to be most effective to communicate with colleagues whether it is with a team member located in a different time zone or initimating the manager about the task updates via official chat groups or voice call. The modern phone operating systems also offer a range of applications that can range from being showcasing your domain expertise with peers or getting training for new skiil development that will uplift the career.
After carefully analyzing both train of thoughts above, I strongly feel that mobile phones are not just a communication device used to reach out kith and kin but also keep touch with fellow workers at office. It is also the best source of information when it comes to knowing about what is happening in personal society as well as the professional world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04430379747 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59255834199 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.103842784 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.111111111 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1111111111 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213642773085 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792289592065 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386450074079 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120359685056 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390521753394 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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