To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. It's a complex statement because it has both assenting and dissenting viewpoint. But considering both sides it is very hard to support the statement. I think, by studying the major cities one could not understand all the important characteristics of a society.
Firstly, Society means a group of people bearing same culture or sharing same geographical territory. Society does not only mean a group of people living in major cities. So it is very naive to think that one should understand the entire culture of a society by knowing its major cities. Nowadays, people living in cities are adapting themselves with modern lifestyle and do not follow their traditions or culture all the time rather become comfortable with the modern life. In contrast, village people and their culture are not changed much compare to the original culture of the society. In this case we can say village people bear their culture more coherently than urban people. So it is not sufficient to study only about major cities for understanding the important characteristics of a society.
Secondly, People living in cities can not maintain all their traditional cultural activities because of their busy city life. They usually tried to do cultural activity on different occasions. As a result children who born and raise in cities are only know their culture theoretically rather practically experienced them. The traditional dress of bangladesh is lungi for men and shari for women but one will not see a men in dhaka city roaming around wearing lungi rather than shirt and pant. In contrast, if you go to a village of bangladesh you will often see men wearing a lungi. So if one try to know about the traditional dress of bangladesh and judged it by surveying dhaka city he will surely misguided and think shirt,and pants are the traditional dress of bangladeshi people.
Considering all the phenomenon above, it is easily inferred that major cities are not always bear its important and core traditions. So it will be very naive to think that one could easily understand important characteristics of a society by studying its major cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07084468665 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88929600263 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446866485014 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4928986813 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9473684211 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210396317424 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858204975654 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103802888401 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161588118479 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888460114641 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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