Write a letter to the Mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention towards an unpleasant situation created by some juvenile on the city Central road of king George boulevard on 27 April which proposed a tragic circumstances. Let me elaborate in details.
Firstly, As I was on the intersection waiting for my turn on the road. Meanwhile, I have recognized that a team of more than two teenagers did a childish act. Besides, they were standing on the pedestrians crossing waiting for the wight hand so that they can commute. Unfortunately, the traffic was high and congested and it took time for the lights to turn. Simultaneously, when it was supposed to be our turn on green light the group let their dogs to run on the green lights in spite of their own light turns. Unluckily,some of the car drivers were unable to stop their cars and rushed immediately. Unfortunately, I was also in the same situation and failure to make break as soon as possible and I hit the dog from an angle. Luckily, neither I was injured nor the dog. Overall, the situation was carefully handled. The boys rushed to see the dog.
Furthermore, the group entitled me to pay for the compensation the fault I had never done because it was part of their own plan. They have performed this situation for their entertainment purpose. Which is unethical act done out of carelessness.
I hope you will look into this matter at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
jasmeen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to bring your ...
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Suggestion: , some
...pite of their own light turns. Unluckily,some of the car drivers were unable to stop ...
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Line 9, column 524, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ite of their own light turns. Unluckily,some of the car drivers were unable to stop their c...
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Line 9, column 650, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nately, I was also in the same situation and failure to make break as soon as pos...
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Line 13, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pay for the compensation the fault I had never done because it was part of their ...
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Line 13, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uation for their entertainment purpose. Which is unethical act done out of carelessne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, look, so, while, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90720038163 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9119563403 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6470588235 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148028565935 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423512319995 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344860225676 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877170559926 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410715305548 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.