Dear Sir or Madam,
I writing this letter to inform you that I forgot my laptop bag in your bus while traveling to New Delhi from Chandigarh.
Last Sunday, I boarded your bus for New Delhi to attend a business meeting along with my shoulder laptop bag. The color of the bag is black with a red-colored symbol of Sony company embossed over it. A white colored laptop with few official documents related to my company was inside the bag.
I called your office at New Delhi branch and informed them about the whole incident. They told me that they had contacted the driver of the bus and asked him to search the bag. They assured me that once they got some information they will contact me again. However, I am still awaiting their call as they never shared any details regarding my bag.
I request you to look into the matter on priority and help me in finding my laptop bag.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Sir or Madam, I writing this letter to inform you that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, regarding, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60233918129 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25861247758 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.299878624 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5454545455 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161521738926 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717359081533 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865047194907 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144202551873 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915821078729 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.