The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The youth of the country is the pillar on which the future of the country stands. Providing best teaching and environment for growth to these young people is really important for the nation. The prompt recommends that the best way to prepare the young people for the leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. While I concede that the sense of competition is really important to excel in this fast-moving world, but I mostly agree with the the assertion in prompt for two reasons.
some might argue that sense of competition is one of the most imprtant skills that a human being can possess. We compete everyday- at school, at college and during the professional life. sports is the best example of the importance of the feeling of competition, a sportsman has to have a strong feeling of competition and pride in his success to flourish in the field. but, many team sports like football also require the sense of cooperation in the individual for the overall progress of the team. Players like N'golo Kante have been crucial for the success of their team because of their ability to play as a part of the team not as a competitve individual. Morever, sense of competition might have some serious ramifications.
First, The sense of competition and excessive pride might make the person tendentious and vainglorious, which can have serious impact on the society they live in. For instance, it was the competition for a piece of land between France and Germany which led to the world war ii. history is rife with such examples. Even, world war ii was instigated by hitler because of the excessive competition and will to be better than other nations. nation's aim should be to develop feeling of cooperation and compassion in its youth to prevent these kinds of incidents in the future.
Further, The most landmark achievement in human history were achieved through cooperation. Take the example of Indian independence where the whole nation stood together and cooperated to expunge the colonial rule out of the country. success in . civil right movement that fought against the disenfranchisement of the black people was achieved through the cooperation of many communities. Moreover, the most important scientific discoveries in the past were achieved through cooperation. The sense of cooperation and working with the other people for a common cause is what demarcates good individual from an excellent
In conclusion, it would be beneficial for the nation and society to the instill the feeling of cooperation and togetherness in its youth. feeling of competition - although important - might have some deleterious effects on the society in the future; and the sense of cooperation, in contrast, might work in the betterment of the society as mentioned in the examples above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Providing the best'.
Suggestion: Providing the best
...which the future of the country stands. Providing best teaching and environment for growth to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...t-moving world, but I mostly agree with the the assertion in prompt for two reasons. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...tion in prompt for two reasons. some might argue that sense of competition i...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t a human being can possess. We compete everyday- at school, at college and during the p...
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Suggestion: Sports
...llege and during the professional life. sports is the best example of the importance o...
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Suggestion: But
...n his success to flourish in the field. but, many team sports like football also re...
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Suggestion: Nations
...d will to be better than other nations. nations aim should be to develop feeling of coo...
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Suggestion: Success
...e the colonial rule out of the country. success in . civil right movement that fought a...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nial rule out of the country. success in . civil right movement that fought agains...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Civil
...l rule out of the country. success in . civil right movement that fought against the ...
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Line 25, column 69, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eneficial for the nation and society to the instill the feeling of cooperation and together...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Feeling
...peration and togetherness in its youth. feeling of competition - although important - m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, still, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11677282378 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93385816342 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48195329087 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7256122642 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.761904762 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359854780341 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948751675912 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166599127855 0.0758088955206 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200781857073 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153712107311 0.0667264976115 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.