We have decided to institute a policy of all-day kindergarten, instead of half-day kindergarten, for all students at Greenwood School. All-day kindergarten will help all our students achieve at their highest levels. The classes will be 'tracked'; so that average students are together, but high-achieving and low-achieving students will be put together in classes. In this way, the high-achieving students will be able to help pull the low-achieving students up to their level, so that no student falls behind. The all-day kindergarten classes will cover the same material previously covered in the half-day kindergarten classes, but will go at a slower speed to accommodate learning differences. In addition, the students will receive extra instruction in music, art, and physical education. One of the greatest benefits of the plan, however, is that students will be in a structured environment for longer hours, reducing the numbers of hours that otherwise would be wasted at home or in day care
The institute's policy to increase the duration of the course form half day to full day will not be benificial for the development of the kindergarteners
Firstly, dividing the students in two groups, namely average student group and low and high achieveing student group, is not a good step in the direction of their overall development. If a student has got a very good skill, he will only be able to shathe skill to the students of his or her group only and not the entire class. For example if a student is brilliant in playing guitar, only the members of his group will be able to learn the skill from him or her.
Secondly, teaching the same course material at a slower pace and providing instruction in music art and physical education after teaching the classroom course will exert extra load and pressure on minds of the kindergarteners. This will also make there schedule hectic and onerus. This will have adverse effects on mental and physical health of the children of such a small age group
Thirdly, it is not necessary that each and every child stays in the day care after school.Also, it is not necessary that the child gets a structured environment only at the kindergarten. There are chances that his or her parents are providing him or her with the same or even better environment than thae environment provided by the kindergarten.
Therefore, introducing full day in the place of half day will make the schedule of the kindergarteners tiresome and burdensome. Introducing this policy will also affect the healths of kindergarteners in a negative manner.
Hence the institute should restain itself from implementing such policies or should implement thepolicy on a trial basis.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 289 350
No. of Characters: 1385 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.123 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.792 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.812 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.697 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.727 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'institutes'' or 'institute's'?
Suggestion: institutes'; institute's
The institutes policy to increase the duration of the ...
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Line 13, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...hild stays in the day care after school.Also, it is not necessary that the child get...
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Line 17, column 201, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative manner" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o affect the healths of kindergarteners in a negative manner. Hence the institute should restain i...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...kindergarteners in a negative manner. Hence the institute should restain itself fro...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 55.5748502994 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 2260.96107784 63% => OK
No of words: 288.0 441.139720559 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97916666667 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91279504943 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 705.55239521 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.8426467439 57.8364921388 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.4 119.503703932 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 23.324526521 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.70786347227 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298012328619 0.218282227539 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116154093973 0.0743258471296 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811718736317 0.0701772020484 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152530826596 0.128457276422 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953352688832 0.0628817314937 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.3799401198 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.3550499002 107% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 12.3882235529 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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