In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people.
What do you think may be the reasons for this?
What problems might this cause in society?
Senior citizens are the backbone of every society. Therefore, there is no doubt the elder people should get their respect in every country. But, this is not the present scenario. In contrast with the past, senior citizens are treated very rudely, almost in every country. There are many reasons why senior people are not getting their adequate respect and attention. But the most important reason is career aspirations.
Nowadays, young generation is more careers oriented. That means people are spending more and more time towards their aspirations, where they are closely invol...
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due to this busy lifestyle young people are losing their culture are unknowingly
due to this busy lifestyle, young people are losing their culture
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