Some people say that holding sport competitions cause many problems, others disagree about this statement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some authorities think that hosting a sports competition is a challenging job due to unexpected threats associate in such kind of program. It is often argued that it is a positive development whilst other disagree and think that it will lead significant drawbacks. This essay agrees that hosting national level tournament would create the problem of protection concern of participant and a lot of investment is additionally required to make it happen. This essay will discuss both points of view.
The foremost problem in regards to carrying out multiple sports competition in similar venue would create the problem of physical threat of the sports personalities. Players from different areas have to adjust with the nominal facilities with strict rules and regulation which might be unfavorable to their regular exercise and further resulted with different types of physical casualties. It is therefore agreed that, hosting such a huge competition would lead to the problem of physical adjustment in the immediate environment. For example, this is most evident in my country that Ministry of Sports in 2010 had postponed the national competition of football game for additional one month of their projected date concerning to the possible threats associated with the playground.
However, many others disagrees and think that organizing national level tournament will provide plenty of opportunities to the new players in terms of personal exposure. New players have already invested their money and time to fulfil their dreams of being success on the field which they have chosen. Despite these, individual pressure and multiple casualties are still cannot be denied and for that reason this essay disagree with the new opportunities to the beginners. For instance, The Himalayan Times recently report that, 40% of sports person would dropout their profession due to an unexpected casualties happen during the tournament.
In conclusion, organizing a platform for the sports personalities is a conscious effort where unexpected threats and casualties have to face by the management committee and the players but it also provided the new opportunities to the new pupils to fulfill their career in sports sector. Lastly, as long as the player would aware enough with the possible threats the physical catastrophe can minimized.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-09 | dilipkarki | 73 | view |
- The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. 67
- The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age. 67
- Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
- People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? 67
- There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some people think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measure will be needed. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
Some authorities think that hosting a sports competition is a challenging job due to...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...points of view. The foremost problem in regards to carrying out multiple sports competitio...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 603, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'casualty'?
Suggestion: casualty
...t their profession due to an unexpected casualties happen during the tournament. In con...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43801652893 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91262620147 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528925619835 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2757782147 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134697527879 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565091827343 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534849011997 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086979603073 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504401298469 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.