Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
In my opinion, Universities should students should allow students to take desired courses. Following are the points which supports my statement.
All students undergo compulsory primary eduction and it fills the basic knowledge which is needed for every one in a society. So, when then enter into University level they already have all the common learnings and it is a perfect age to choose what they want rather than imposing generic model. University is the final step after which they enter the real world and so have to learn to make their own decisions.
"Every finger in a hand is unique". There is a very minute chance that every student pursuing their studies will have same interest, so a common education system will not be fruitful. Living in a free nation and forcing an undesired course upon our next generation is not democratic.
If we look into this issue from a students perspective, it is nothing but stress and discomfort to attend lectures for a course which not only is boring but also a time waste. In the recent years, student suicides and dropouts are increasing, the main cause when unwrapped turns out to be unenthusiastic courses.
I want to conclude saying "Who knows what is best for a person than himself" and thus Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... If we look into this issue from a students perspective, it is nothing but stress a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 58.6224719101 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 229.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05676855895 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72500279694 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633187772926 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4590817924 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.272727273 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355649411209 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110320715768 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137616030638 0.0758088955206 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193881570881 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149120988525 0.0667264976115 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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