A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
In my opinion, I partially disagree with the author's claim of having same national curriculum for all students in a nation until they enter the college. The following are the reasons to support my idea.
Firstly, there are 155 nations currently and each are uniquely diversified when compared to other. Even a single nation has a lot of differences among themselves. Hence, it is difficult to have a single system that satisfies all needs. Let us consider India as an example, India having a very large area has a lot of separations within. With more than a billion population it is not possible to fit a single structure for all the students as the diversity in their background status, place they life is immense. We cannot teach a student about Computer Science when his or her village does not even has electricity. So author's idea might not work for the above scenario.
On the other hand, keeping standards in field is a very good way to ensure every individual gets the equal oppurtunities. The world after college does not give any particular discount based on the region from which we come from. In any corporate or government exam there is no special consideration. For example, GRE itself does not take into account whether you are from a rural part or an urban part of a country. Hence, by giving equal syllabus we give similar knowledge to every individual to excel beyond college.
Local goverments know what is better for their people when compared to a Central government. The person who is leading your country might not know in detail about the issues faced by your community in your small village. He or she will tend to take a decision based on some assumptions which might make you suffer more. Hence, local governance should have flexibility to solve these kind of issues as they have concrete idea.
Conclusion, with lot of pros and cons to this idea it is difficult to have a definite agrument. The overall idea potrayed here does not have any flaws in it. But it is not practical enough to apply in real world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e when his or her village does not even has electricity. So authors idea might not ...
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Line 13, column 378, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...rnance should have flexibility to solve these kind of issues as they have concrete idea. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75910364146 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58962941585 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582633053221 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4535254469 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.9047619048 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193484947786 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479248142036 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105404912658 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12104617772 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149111613639 0.0667264976115 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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