Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be affective?
Nowadays, in many populated cities, traffic and pollution problems have drastically been increasing, raising the price of fuels like petrol is considered as the best measure to tackle this issue. I personally agree with this to some extent, and, of course, there are some other effective choices to address this difficulty which I will discuss some of them in this essay.
increasing the price of energy resources could be one of the most effective ways to curb the use of personal cars. when the fuel price rise, people may use their personal cars in just necessary situations, but, this is Provided that there are other possible choices for them like public transportation system. if government and city authorities didn't predict other reasonable options instead of using personal cars, this could lead to converse consequences like decreasing the use of public transportation caused by increasing the fule and ticket price.
Turning to other possibilities of supportive measures, improving transportation infrastructure could be mention as the most supportive act to rising the petrol price. another effective measure could be encouraging citizens to use public transportation by informing them about the dangers threatening our eco-systems and their children. Finally, government and politicians should encourage companies and industries to invest in the development eco-friendly Cars.
In conclusion, although I agree that increasing the fuels' price is an effective way to tackle the issue of traffic and pollution, this is provided that other measures support this policy, there are other measures like improving the public transportation system, informing people, or investment on eco-friendly program to support the increasing price policy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63396226415 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06050066057 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2674479122 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.888888889 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163842395773 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753154503381 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492083936747 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110769907582 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344674228451 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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