Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and town is more important than building houses.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that the most significant in the open areas of urban centres is planting trees rather than constructing buildings. In my opinion, I agree that the vegetation in empty areas would be to reduce pollution and balance the temperature.
Admittedly, the reduction of pollution would be possible by vegetated location in cities and towns. In other words, Flora is an Eco-friendly nature living thing that observes a carbon dioxide as emission from the surrounding. This plant releases the oxygen to live other living things which make a balance. For instance, plantation of trees on the dividers as well sides of pedestrian of roads were a way of diminishing the pollutants from the atmosphere. ddition, few mini-scale industries were inside of cities that have been ejecting the hot flue gases, so they grow the plants on their industry plant area. Moreover, continuing of plantation in certain areas would result in healthy air, and might balance the ambient temperature.
Another point to reason, the temperature of urban and towns would have maintained by habitat. The variation of temperatures has been effecting on people on summer season as well other seasons. High temperatures were causing due to fewer vegetation areas. For example, to be good weather as per season timing there should be to planting will be levelled the climate. Consequently, the most concerning of temperatures raising, it ought to plant on free places.
To conclude, I believe that vegetation is a more essential part of the world to be habitat and it would lead a less pollution and balanced climate in urban areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ddition
...ing the pollutants from the atmosphere. ddition, few mini-scale industries were inside ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16349809886 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88342818128 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8663904065 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107125684435 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359312520731 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339114492861 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664617893143 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331472096722 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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