Society should identify those children who have special talents and abilities and begin training them at an early age so that they can excel in their areas of ability. Otherwise, those talents are likely to remain underdeveloped.”
Graham Greene said there is always one moment in childhood when the door opens and lets the future in. society is the door and if it nurtures their talents into a grown profession then it will gift itself with a directional future. it is said that every person born on the earth has a talent. it is the upbringing that decide whether talent will win or fail. childhood is the tulip which tells how the fully grown flower would be. children, who are gifted with spacial talents start showing their ways towards the talent at the very beginning of their age, and this is the best time when people around them can use that indication to give a turn to those children into a professional superstars in their talents.
moreover, with bright future children will be able to pursue their own choice. the career they want to go for, not their parents, relatives, teachers or siblings. the jane doze girls who in the starting begin their career with desk jobs and later left those desks for their passion and the hidden talent inside them. with society's help and support talents like such will no longer be needing a change in career or the burden of that change.
while, society can help children in following their passion, this support can also increase equality. equality of rich and poor. not recognised by the world and born in dirt, talented and extraordinary children unheard. on the other hand, rich people get the career they want . when society helps for example, the organisation slum soccer in india helps the poor, directionless young minds and through the beautiful game football, it teaches them to stay away from drugs, alcohol and turn them to socially empowered, hopeful and purposeful lives.
furthermore, like slum soccer, helping the poor and unprivileged youth, the society can also decrease the inequality of ethnicity, physical disability and even gender equality and acceptance. if given recognition in the early ages, the inequality and discouragement and refusal can be pared down. those, who are physically challenged, or are from poor countries or the third gender.
therefore, society can help those who are really talented. these talented trained people can change the world, they can become a better person by reaching their potential and the most important support their family. so, training the children of special talents will surely give the world a britten future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, third, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99501246883 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48317523616 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556109725686 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.3921165299 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.380952381 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0952380952 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335400549888 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933584104497 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710632181722 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190247425219 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688439502655 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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