Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Scientific
...or the overall development of a society.Scientific research and the related development is...
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Suggestion: The
...le towards the development of a society.The author assert that government should pl...
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Suggestion: asserts
...the development of a society.The author assert that government should place few,if any...
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... assert that government should place few,if any restrictions on scientic reasearch ...
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Suggestion: Indisputably
...s on scientic reasearch and development.Indisputably others argue that there should not be a...
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...y which leads to development of a nation ,so that its not wise decision to put a r...
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...on to put a restriction on it. Firstly,on has a hidden talent associated with it,...
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...n has a hidden talent associated with it,and may be this hidden talent can lead to g...
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...den talent can lead to great innovation.So government should in fact encourage thi...
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...vation programs throught out the nation.For Example.NASA has been successfully laun...
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Suggestion: launched
....For Example.NASA has been successfully launch Its first trip to the Moon,which is act...
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Suggestion: , which
...sfully launch Its first trip to the Moon,which is actually a great achievement in the ...
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Suggestion: , If
...ually a great achievement in the history,If government has put a restrictions on it...
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Suggestion: a restriction; restrictions
...nt in the history,If government has put a restrictions on it then we might not hear this news ...
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...s on it then we might not hear this news from NASA team.All we know the example o...
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...ight not hear this news from NASA team.All we know the example of renowned persona...
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... of renowned personality Kalpana Chawala,an enginner from Punjab state,has been com...
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...na Chawala,an enginner from Punjab state,has been completed a journey on Space.This ...
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...e,has been completed a journey on Space.This is ideal example for us Secondly,le ...
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...ey on Space.This is ideal example for us Secondly,le argue that there should be s...
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...This is ideal example for us Secondly,le argue that there should be some limitat...
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... is ideal example for us Secondly,le argue that there should be some limitations o...
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... because it involves with the huge risk.Many youth may losse their life while perfor...
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...h may losse their life while performing this activities.But risk is everywhere,witho...
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...r life while performing this activities.But risk is everywhere,without risk nothing...
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...g this activities.But risk is everywhere,without risk nothing can be achieved.If we want...
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...re,without risk nothing can be achieved.If we want to move forward in life we shou...
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Suggestion: Also
...ace all the challenges and difficulties.Also Government should put the Research kind...
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Suggestion: Also,
...ace all the challenges and difficulties.Also Government should put the Research kind...
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...hat adolscents from very early can make a interest in it and actually work for it...
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...actually work for it In the conclusion,the overall development and the progress of...
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...depends on the people of society itself.So its in fact responsiblity of a governme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in fact, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 324.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45061728395 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54487636639 2.79657885939 127% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487654320988 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 162.0 23.0359550562 703% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 360.0 60.3974514979 596% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 883.0 118.986275619 742% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 162.0 23.4991977007 689% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 55.0 5.21951772744 1054% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368207426345 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.341473488661 0.0831039109588 411% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136457383012 0.0758088955206 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224546875233 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153144862062 0.0667264976115 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 85.2 14.1392134831 603% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -101.41 48.8420337079 -208% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 67.7 12.1743820225 556% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.47 8.38706741573 184% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 11.8971910112 521% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 66.8 11.2143820225 596% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.