Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development
Scientific research and development is incumbent for the overall development of a society.Scientific research and the related development is playing a vital role towards the development of a society.The author assert that government should place few,if any restrictions on scientic reasearch and development.Indisputably others argue that there should not be any restrictions on the scientific development and related research kind of activities I agree with later statement that as this kind of researches and developmet actually contributing to the overall progress of a society which leads to development of a nation ,so that its not wise decision to put a restriction on it.
Firstly,on has a hidden talent associated with it,and may be this hidden talent can lead to great innovation.So government should in fact encourage this kind of innovation programs throught out the nation.For Example.NASA has been successfully launch Its first trip to the Moon,which is actually a great achievement in the history,If government has put a restrictions on it then we might not hear this news from NASA team.All we know the example of renowned personality Kalpana Chawala,an enginner from Punjab state,has been completed a journey on Space.This is ideal example for us
Secondly,le argue that there should be some limitations on scientic and research development activities because it involves with the huge risk.Many youth may losse their life while performing this activities.But risk is everywhere,without risk nothing can be achieved.If we want to move forward in life we should face all the challenges and difficulties.Also Government should put the Research kind of syllabus in the every school so that adolscents from very early can make a interest in it and actually work for it
In the conclusion,the overall development and the progress of a nation depends on the people of society itself.So its in fact responsiblity of a government to induce people to take a part in Scientific and research development activities and contribute to the overall development of a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 324.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45061728395 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54487636639 2.79657885939 127% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487654320988 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 162.0 23.0359550562 703% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 360.0 60.3974514979 596% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 883.0 118.986275619 742% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 162.0 23.4991977007 689% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 55.0 5.21951772744 1054% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368207426345 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.341473488661 0.0831039109588 411% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136457383012 0.0758088955206 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224546875233 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153144862062 0.0667264976115 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 85.2 14.1392134831 603% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -101.41 48.8420337079 -208% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 67.7 12.1743820225 556% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.47 8.38706741573 184% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 11.8971910112 521% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 66.8 11.2143820225 596% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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