Nowadays many students live with their families while others go to another city to study at a university. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios. Include relevant examples in your answer.
It is irrefutable that globalization has re-structured the family set-ups in abundant countries around the world.Due to this prevailing trend, many youngsters opt to migrate to varying cities to pursue their tertiary education while others prefer to reside with their forebears. Undoubtedly,both these trends have their own sets of benefits and drawbacks.
Admittedly,the most significant positive outcome for the student would be a chance to be educated in a renowned institution thus guaranteeing a better career prospect.With regards to the placements,most top-level universities have tie ups with companies that can offer well paid jobs to their alumini.However,a student may find it difficult to adjust to the life in a new place,faraway from the affection and love of family members,thus making them feel lonely.For instance,sometimes a situation that cannot be tackled alone by the young ones might lead towards depression.Thus,it is crystal clear that distance education in universities could prove to have dual effects.
Despite the above mentioned arguments,educating oneself in their own native zones would proffer them with the advantage of comfort,familiarity and guidance of their progenitors.Moreover,not only minimum levels of adjustments would be required in a known environment,but also parents can keep a watchful eye preventing the youth from being misled. In such a situation the child may not be able to learn about different cultures as they would be restricted to their own cities.A good illustration of this is that it would limit their interactions with strangers,thus curbing their ability towards independent problem solving.So,avoiding migration could prove to be beneficial as well as detrimental to the overall development of teenagers.
To conclude,as a popular saying goes that every rose-bush does have some thorns,this scenario as well does have both positive as well as negative influences on the students.On the one hand,education in another cities university while giving better growth prospects would deprive the child of quality family time.On the other hand,studying in the same city would alleviate the concerns of adjusting in a new environment but would curtail independency.It can be envisaged that by following a pragmatic approach the best of both the approaches could be chosen for the benefit of both students and parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69467787115 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.69520131867 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596638655462 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.108359666 49.4020404114 403% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 338.833333333 106.682146367 318% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.5 20.7667163134 287% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161438816589 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893631666108 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403421213817 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106904241347 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421545746778 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 13.0946893788 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.61 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.74 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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