Presently, the culture is becoming same around the globe. This is because of advertisement of similar products in all the countries and people idealize the celebrities,hence,follow their customs.In my opinion, it is a negative trend because it is threat to cultural identity.
To begin with, cultural diversity is depleting owing to the fact that digital media has huge impact on one's life. Because digital media broadcast the same programmes in the entire world, people's choices are becoming alike.Therefore, they wear similar dresses,share common interests in food, sport and other activities.A survey was conducted in the U.S which depicted that more than two-third of people shared similar customs though they were from different ethnicities.
In addition to this, due to freedom of choice , people are allowed to follow the showbiz stars. Since they wear whatever is in fashion lately, people in an attempt to copy them set a trend.Consequently, a custom is formed which most of people observe.An article published in a famous newspaper read that clebrities have great influence in one's life in terms of their dressing style, eating habits and communicating with others.So, when peopl adore same stars, their customs become the same.
To conclude, cultural varaition is getting extinct because of the influence of celebrities on people throughout the world and same ads being seen everywhere around.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, third, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45205479452 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17907674107 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.880950036 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.571428571 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216642121046 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104276709244 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579862727583 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138632134008 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060363712019 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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