Write a short paragraph (80-100 words) about Melbourne
Melbourne is a beautiful city, which is the capital of the Australian state of Victoria, located in Southeast Australia. It is an attractive destination for
foreign tourists. Melbourne is a multicultural city with great variety of fascinating places, for instance, Melbourne Museum, Queen Victoria Market and Melbourne Aquarium. Especially, this city is famous for its education. Melbourne provides an excellent education system so many international students have chosen to study there. Apart from that, one of the most special reasons make the visitors love this city is the largest operational urban tram network in the world which consists 250 kilometres (160 miles) of double track, 493 trams, 24 routes, and 1,763 tram stops exactly. That’s why this city became one of the most livable cities around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lia. It is an attractive destination for foreign tourists. Melbourne is a multicu...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Foreign
... It is an attractive destination for foreign tourists. Melbourne is a multicultural ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 128.0 315.596192385 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.453125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85437575268 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71875 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6213287301 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0745321462999 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337098788624 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453286412928 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572979811887 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00878353961967 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.