The world has observed from time to time that if there are no conflicts or struggles then there is no progress, either it be
with a person or a society. Learning and adapting in this ever changing globalized world has been core essence of survival.
As it is rightly said; "If there is no struggle there is no progress", I strongly believe the above state assertion because it is
through struggles and limitations most important lessons have been learnt by human beings which is elucidated as further.
Human beings are an emotional bunch with plethora of feelings that have been developed since our evolution; most of
these feelings can be attributed to our survival thus far. The important thing to notice that our struggle is right from the
stone age where our ancestors were devoid of necessary amenities of life. Although we had food and water, that was the
age when fire was discovered to get protected from the deleterious effects of winter. This example is full of immense struggle
and limitations that our forefathers had gone through which shows that humans thrive when encountered with challenges.
Furthermore, if we look around our society is filled with plenty of such examples who had achieved success in their life
only by overcoming their limitations and years of arduous efforts. One such example is of famous first women Noble Prize
winner, Marie Curie who discovered the radioactive elements and dedicated her entire life (till death) towards her passion.
Another example is of Martin Luther King, who fought against the racism and segregation and made an immense contribution in the American Rights Movement and was also awarded with Noble Prize for Peace.
Also famous personalities such as Henry Ford, Oprah Winfrey had struggled right through their childhood and achieved success due to their persistent efforts and immense of hard work, same was the case with innovator of "Electricity", Thomas Edison who on being failed believed that he had found 10,000 ways that won't work.
In sum, there is nothing wrong in wanting or desiring for success, one can argue that gives us a sense of self satisfaction and no doubt it does. However, if does get into someone's head it would make that person weak, ignorant and also impertinent. Struggling through one's limitations and trying to break through the shell will make one strong and sensitive to the world around him, although a sense of 'success' is what the struggle is for. It's not always about the destination, it's the journey that matters in the end.
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.... Its not always about the destination, its the journey that matters in the end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, thus, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08274231678 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75001771901 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565011820331 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5088793693 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.333333333 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.97078651685 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257506155155 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814571035378 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826867613268 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926869885105 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719277902258 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.