The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce for building purposes.
The pictures provide several information about how to produce cement and concrete in some stages as well as different ingredients. overall, to get cement need limestone and clay as the basic materials in contrast how to produce concrete need cement, water, sand and small stones as the main substances.
The first matter is how to processing limestone and clay becoming cement. Mix the both of materials include in crusher that will processed by mixer where the ingredients have become powder whereas, rotated by heater then heated them and transversed in grinder container. In addition, the result is becoming cement, which is finally packed in bags.
The other processing is concrete production, where this is just a stage nevertheless needed several materials that will mixed in concrete container. it is needed cement more than a tenth whereas water 10% moreover sand as much as a quarter then finally graver however small stones a half. Mix at all ingredients in order to be concrete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some information
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, whereas, in addition, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15432098765 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71076927841 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8132602374 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 5.23603664747 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197872876149 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944429708258 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688681627986 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14031053246 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604414918454 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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