The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The information that is showed by the picture is about processing of using water to result electricity energy. Overall, there are several steps that is passed by hydro-electric power generation until used in society.
First of all, there is a cycle where the sun as the main cause the ocean experience evaporation because the sea is given hot energy. After that the cloud which is formed because of this evaporation undergo precipitation then will collect on reservoir hot however DAM and the wish water will be processed becoming electricity.
Base on the diagram, the water is the flowing pass over valve that always open or close, until arrive in turbine as the item to transfer the energy use tower with high voltage cable white that the water still flow to pumped back to reservoir and the cycle starts over again. Finally the electric power to schools, hospital and in society via cable that underground.
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Some people believe that the university main aim is to help graduates for a better jobs. While others believe that university education bring benefits for individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinions. 73
- The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plants for its development. 73
- Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increases the crime and violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- whether or not someone achieve their aims is mostly a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ervoir and the cycle starts over again. Finally the electric power to schools, hospital...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, so, still, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96103896104 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58559817621 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1450179931 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177036420151 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828325128333 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073174977617 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11266110166 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404021032915 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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