You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participant liked about the hotel.
Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel.
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.
Dear sir/madam,
I am writing in connection with the event I organized for my company, ABC ltd, on Nov 20th at your hotel. I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for hosting us. Although the participants liked the ambience of the hotel and the services of your courteous staff, they all complained about the food.
Let me explain in detail. Some of the food items served during the event were cold and we found it really hard to eat them particularly the rotis which obviously should be served hot. Another issue was that there was no variety. We had participants from abroad who were not particularly fond of Indian food.
I suggest you install food warmers for all the dishes, and not just for the gravies. I also recommend that you add some western dishes like pasta and toast to your menu.
I really hope that you will consider my suggestions.
Yours faithfully,
Amir
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...he food. Let me explain in detail. Some of the food items served during the event were...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...like pasta and toast to your menu. I really hope that you will consider my s...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80891719745 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53600787791 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68152866242 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1477134856 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6363636364 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335498668079 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100272452117 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732385548581 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163716738657 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108838862357 0.0580467560999 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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