The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The given bar graph describe regular physical activity in 2010 year of Australia country. This is calculated in percentage and varied by age group respectively.
Firstly, women are almost proactive in all age group than mostly any men age group except in 15 to 24 year age group. They are little bit less percentage than men that is 47.7% whereas men's age group percentage is 52.8.
Secondly, Men's group were at zenith of 52.8% in 15 to 24 age group and lower at 39.5% in 35 to 44 age group in 2010 year. In between those 25 to 34 age group fits with 42.2%. But after 44 year men's physical activity again gets rose gradually to 43.1% in 45 to 54 age and 45.1%, 46.7% in 55-64 and more than 65 age group respectively.
Moreover, Women's are surprising most active in 35 to 64 age group with approximately 53% and gets slightly decrease to 47.1% even after 65 age which was approximately same in their young age of 15 to 24 year which was 47.7%
In a nutshell, Women were more active by physically in Australia than men and not only active in particular group but continuously doing regular physical work in all age group.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...pt in 15 to 24 year age group. They are little bit less percentage than men that is 47.7% ...
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Line 13, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mately 53% and gets slightly decrease to 47.1% even after 65 age which was approx...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, whereas, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56097560976 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53425784398 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.60170601 43.030603864 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.571428571 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372363998197 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19930111377 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058799547683 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249951848344 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693253884661 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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