Some people believe that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Everyone feels special and happy when they receive gifts form their loved ones hence giving gifts has become an important aspect of life. On the contrary, few people believe that other than gifts, there are other ways to show affection. I will discuss both the views in the following paragraphs.
The tradition of gifting for special occasions like birthdays, weddings and other events has started from our forefather’s time. Today, we live in a materialistic world where care and affection are measured by the number of gift items received by friends and family. Also, people who live away from loved ones like to shower gifts for every special occasion as it is the best way to show them that they care. To exemplify, Children who live away from their parents, likes to send them gifts on occasion of Father or Mother’s Day or on their anniversary or birthdays, as he cannot celebrate with them inperson.
In contrast, few psychologists believe that gifts are not the appropriate medium to demonstrate love and care. Like taking care and supporting during the time of thick and thin or during illness, demonstrate respect and gratitude. To illustrate further on the above point, a daughter-in-law can show her caring nature by taking care of her in-laws need. Similarly, a son-in-law can do the same thing for his in-laws family. Not only this will not only improve the family relations but also help in strengthen the bond.
In my view, gift is important and should be given for special occasions like birthday, marriages and other events. However, showing respect, care and support is the best way to spreads happiness and to make your loved one feel special.
To recapitulate, gifts make everyone feel special, but at the same time relations improve and get strong through love, care, support and respect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...hen they receive gifts form their loved ones hence giving gifts has become an import...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
.... Also, people who live away from loved ones like to shower gifts for every special ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, similarly, so, then, in contrast, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02631578947 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68942789834 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4501951497 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309824768903 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101247639339 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593692180399 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16402153457 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648284598908 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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